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Ok, I'll extend it until after the weekend.

Thank you so much! I had planned to finish, but I've been out of town all day and the rest of the weekend is busy for me, so I'll have to finish it on Monday/Tuesday at the earliest.

That and it's already 2am local time and have only four hours before the deadline, at which I'll be sleeping...

Name: Aragonn "Ara" Valeria
Gender: Male
Age: 67
Parentage: TBD
Siblings: Colberius, Laurentus, Taurus


Physical description: Tall and somewhat slender, light complexion and high cheekbones, dirty blonde hair maintained very short with blue eyes, clean shaven most of the time
Style of dress: Typically a white undershirt and a green dress shirt, a leather jacket with thin metal armor plating on shoulders and chest and around the forearms, durable but stylish dirt brown pants, leather boots to match


Home city: Sørhavn
History: TBD
Personality: (WIP) Very analytical, quick to anger but remains remarkably rational considering, caring of family and business, almost always strategizing how to tackle problems that arise


Skills: Remarkable ship designer and trained to defend himself from attackers
Tools: a belt to hold ammo and holsters for the pistols, survival knife in his right boot, gearwork pocket watch with his initials carved inside
Weapons: A double spear in the place of a sword and two double action revolvers which he wields with decent accuracy
Vehicles/ships: A small fleet of military ships he built for himself

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Notable allies:
Notable enemies

Name: Lucifer Morningstar (Trevor Belmont) he goes by lucifer as his street name but his real name is Trevor
Gender: Male
Age: 30
Parentage: unknown to him
Siblings: Gabriel Sebastian Penguon-Calidan, Vidilune


Physical description: Height 6'3" Dark hair and well toned but not bulky due to his life on the streets taking care of himself here's a picture:

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Style of dress: Lucifer grew up in the streets and did not have much money. He wore whatever he could steal and grew to like the fine fabrics of nobles so he wears suits but he cant afford them all the time so he switches between them and dark clothes and a purple bandana.
suits:

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my color is purple so picture purple instead of that red and a coat and top hat

normal wear:

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this bandana is purple instead of black and is worn around the neck with pretty much all regular clothes and in a back pocket when wearing a suit. His normal clothes is just regular cheap clothes usually black with purple

Home city: tbd
History: Lucifer Morningstar is the lost brother of Gabriel penguon and vidilune. At a young age Lucifer got lost playing and was kidnapped by some criminals hoping to get a ransom the criminals were unfortunately arrested for different charges and the kid given to a different towns social services unknown to everyone that he belonged to the penguon family. When the criminals were finally released and they were found by the now adult Lucifer (he had been keeping tabs on them) he made them tell him about his past and he discovered he belonged to house penguon.
Personality: Lucifer is never one to take anything too seriously. He has seen the bad side of things and if it wasn't for his sense of humor he would have never survived. Lucifer is sarcastic and likes to joke but is always friendly and a gentleman especially to females. It is spoken in hushed whispers however about his rage which surfaces very rarely. If Lucifer is ever pushed to the point where he is angry he turns into a different person and is likely to kill someone in the next few moments.


Skills: Charismatic and a good leader, his gang background gave him a lot of connections to all sorts of people. Lucifer is well known for his hand to hand combat his proficiency with blades both throwing and fighting. He is also very proficient in parkour or the art of free running (it was necessary to escape the law or an angry shop owner)
Tools: gloves with a special metal around the knuckles to make punching more painful to the opponent and less strain on the hands.
Weapons: Lucifer has hidden throwing knives all over his person at all times and a hidden hook he likes to use as a weapon and to help with parkour
Vehicles/ships: His only vehicle is his shoes unfortunately

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Notable allies: The Viceroys (Lucifers Gang, they use the color purple and I'll put up a symbol when in a bit)
Notable enemiesThe Bowlers(A rival gang, maybe one of you can take charge if you are interested they use red but can be changed if one of you takes charge)
Does this look good? its my first real rp application

Name: Indosyl Feirvan
Gender: Male
Age: 111
Parentage: Daivir and Marda Feirvan (Can be left blank)
Siblings: Beiran Feirvan, Aaron Feirvan, Carette Feirvan (Can be left blank)


Physical description: Average height, muscular(ish) build, white skin, red/purple eyes
Style of dress: He wears heavy armour, even when he is simply trying to rest, and eat, although he wears tattered rags when sleeping.

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This guy is pretty accurate.

Home city: Kört
History: The son Daivir Feirvan, and he lived in the mountains just outside of Wintrean soil. When he reached the age of 15, his parents died of frostbite, due to an especially cold winter, and his siblings had decided to flee the mountains to head south months ago, due to the extreme poverty of the area. He now had nothing. But one day, when he was on the brink of death, as per usual, he looked over his shoulder, and saw the great land of Wintreath, waiting for him. He had considered going before, but had never been able to pluck up the courage, but now... what had he left? He has been adventuring ever since!  .

Personality: Strict, patriotic, and harsh, but secretly loving and caring, and was very fond of his brother's pet cat, Scratcher.


Skills: He has impressive skills with a grappling hook, navigation, and lightning-fast reflexes.
Tools: A brass pocket watch, which may be used to find your exact co-ordinates, as well as the time.
Weapons: A trusty flail, passed down throughout the generations of Feirvan.
Vehicles/ships: A white horse, which blends in brilliantly with the snows of northern Wintreath.

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Notable allies: Weissreich (maybe    )
Notable enemies: The Sisterhood of Aerpan

@Nutjob7 - I can't accept your character as it doesn't fit with the setting, sorry. Search out the Establishment of Setting thread (in the same forum as your Misty Caverns RP thread, though it might be on the second page), give that a read, have a look at the interest thread and read through everyone's character applications in this thread and then get back to me

A few points, if you're looking at what to correct:
- Magic isn't a controllable force in this RP in all but a few specific situations I will announce.
- Your character has to be human. There can be minor divergences, such as fur going down your spine or sharper teeth, but nothing major like drinking blood or having grey skin. The eye colours are fine though.
- If you're interested in having a flying vessel, take a look at the opening post of the interest thread which shows a fast sloop at the top of the page. That'll give you an idea of what they look like, but think airship/zeppelin combined with combustion engines and heavy weapons emplacements.
- Your character is pretty young for a Wintrean; the average lifespan is 110 to 130 years, with people being fit and mobile up until only 5 years before death.
- In RP titles might be a thing down the line but at the moment the only Counts/Dukes/Lords/etc are ones who Wintermoot has recognised himself. I'm afraid you wouldn't be able to be a Count just yet.

Otherwise, nice to have you interested! We'll be starting soonish, so keep your eyes peeled


EDIT: Here's the useful links with a bit of explanation of what each one is.

Establishment of Setting - http://wintreath.com/forums/index.php?topic=1057.0
This is the history of the world we'll be roleplaying in from about 5000 years ago to just before the current day. It also has notes on the culture of Wintreath in the RP, a little bit of contextual explanation of society and Houses and notes on magic. If you want to get an idea for the world we're going to be in, this is where to start.

Oh, The Places You'll Go In Wintreath - http://wintreath.com/forums/index.php?topic=321.0
This is a good starting place for getting a mental picture of what kind of technology Wintreath uses. As you're aware, the thread documents important locations in the country, and gives a bit of history and an idea of the kind of people who live there. It's worth reading through every post in some detail, as the Establishment of Setting thread will reference locations described here.

House RP Interest thread - http://wintreath.com/forums/index.php?topic=3378
The first post is the one to read, gives you a little bit of an intro and explains what'll be going on. If you've got any questions for me about anything to do with the RP, ask in this thread.

@Nutjob7 - I can't accept your character as it doesn't fit with the setting, sorry. Search out the Establishment of Setting thread (in the same forum as your Misty Caverns RP thread, though it might be on the second page), give that a read, have a look at the interest thread and read through everyone's character applications in this thread and then get back to me

A few points, if you're looking at what to correct:
- Magic isn't a controllable force in this RP in all but a few specific situations I will announce.
- Your character has to be human. There can be minor divergences, such as fur going down your spine or sharper teeth, but nothing major like drinking blood or having grey skin. The eye colours are fine though.
- If you're interested in having a flying vessel, take a look at the opening post of the interest thread which shows a fast sloop at the top of the page. That'll give you an idea of what they look like, but think airship/zeppelin combined with combustion engines and heavy weapons emplacements.
- Your character is pretty young for a Wintrean; the average lifespan is 110 to 130 years, with people being fit and mobile up until only 5 years before death.
- In RP titles might be a thing down the line but at the moment the only Counts/Dukes/Lords/etc are ones who Wintermoot has recognised himself. I'm afraid you wouldn't be able to be a Count just yet.

Woah! That's pretty strict. But never mind; I shall make corrections. Although, I do want to point out that My character was supposed to be the Count of Varjaahd (my nation), not one of Wintreath.
Would that be allowed if I specified it? 

Also, different humans have different skin tones, why could grey not be one?
And I could go drink somebody's blood right now,if I wanted to! In fact, some people actually do this in real life, who consider themselves "Vampires".

@Nutjob7 - I can't accept your character as it doesn't fit with the setting, sorry. Search out the Establishment of Setting thread (in the same forum as your Misty Caverns RP thread, though it might be on the second page), give that a read, have a look at the interest thread and read through everyone's character applications in this thread and then get back to me

A few points, if you're looking at what to correct:
- Magic isn't a controllable force in this RP in all but a few specific situations I will announce.
- Your character has to be human. There can be minor divergences, such as fur going down your spine or sharper teeth, but nothing major like drinking blood or having grey skin. The eye colours are fine though.
- If you're interested in having a flying vessel, take a look at the opening post of the interest thread which shows a fast sloop at the top of the page. That'll give you an idea of what they look like, but think airship/zeppelin combined with combustion engines and heavy weapons emplacements.
- Your character is pretty young for a Wintrean; the average lifespan is 110 to 130 years, with people being fit and mobile up until only 5 years before death.
- In RP titles might be a thing down the line but at the moment the only Counts/Dukes/Lords/etc are ones who Wintermoot has recognised himself. I'm afraid you wouldn't be able to be a Count just yet.

Woah! That's pretty strict. But never mind; I shall make corrections. Although, I do want to point out that My character was supposed to be the Count of Varjaahd (my nation), not one of Wintreath.
Would that be allowed if I specified it? 

Also, different humans have different skin tones, why could grey not be one?
And I could go drink somebody's blood right now,if I wanted to! In fact, some people actually do this in real life, who consider themselves "Vampires".

The Houses RP is a character level roleplay based in Wintreath (the country, not a region). You can be from elsewhere, but remember that'll mean you're not a native Wintrean, with all the issues that might entail. House Valeria has done something similar with their origins, saying that they originated from another nation and fled to Wintreath, so you can do whatever.

Sorry if the guidelines seem a little strict but this is a world I've spent quite some time putting together, and unfortunately that does mean that there's gonna be certain things that won't fit in with the setting. Drinking blood, yeah, that's something that doesn't fit in. Blood magic, of a form, may well feature later on, but not as something controllable.


E: To make a little more sense, this RP isn't meant to be "people from their own nations come together in Wintreath", but rather "for the sake of this RP, everyone's nations are actually just parts of a bigger nation called Wintreath, and they're all citizens from within its borders" kind of thing. The Oh, The Places You'll Go thread is a place to add in character locations to the world (so as long as they don't have space ships or overt magic, and as long as they fit the semi-medieval, semi-modern, semi-steampunk style theme) etc.

@Nutjob7 - I can't accept your character as it doesn't fit with the setting, sorry. Search out the Establishment of Setting thread (in the same forum as your Misty Caverns RP thread, though it might be on the second page), give that a read, have a look at the interest thread and read through everyone's character applications in this thread and then get back to me

A few points, if you're looking at what to correct:
- Magic isn't a controllable force in this RP in all but a few specific situations I will announce.
- Your character has to be human. There can be minor divergences, such as fur going down your spine or sharper teeth, but nothing major like drinking blood or having grey skin. The eye colours are fine though.
- If you're interested in having a flying vessel, take a look at the opening post of the interest thread which shows a fast sloop at the top of the page. That'll give you an idea of what they look like, but think airship/zeppelin combined with combustion engines and heavy weapons emplacements.
- Your character is pretty young for a Wintrean; the average lifespan is 110 to 130 years, with people being fit and mobile up until only 5 years before death.
- In RP titles might be a thing down the line but at the moment the only Counts/Dukes/Lords/etc are ones who Wintermoot has recognised himself. I'm afraid you wouldn't be able to be a Count just yet.

Woah! That's pretty strict. But never mind; I shall make corrections. Although, I do want to point out that My character was supposed to be the Count of Varjaahd (my nation), not one of Wintreath.
Would that be allowed if I specified it? 

Also, different humans have different skin tones, why could grey not be one?
And I could go drink somebody's blood right now,if I wanted to! In fact, some people actually do this in real life, who consider themselves "Vampires".

The Houses RP is a character level roleplay based in Wintreath (the country, not a region). You can be from elsewhere, but remember that'll mean you're not a native Wintrean, with all the issues that might entail. House Valeria has done something similar with their origins, saying that they originated from another nation and fled to Wintreath, so you can do whatever.

Sorry if the guidelines seem a little strict but this is a world I've spent quite some time putting together, and unfortunately that does mean that there's gonna be certain things that won't fit in with the setting. Drinking blood, yeah, that's something that doesn't fit in. Blood magic, of a form, may well feature later on, but not as something controllable.


E: To make a little more sense, this RP isn't meant to be "people from their own nations come together in Wintreath", but rather "for the sake of this RP, everyone's nations are actually just parts of a bigger nation called Wintreath, and they're all citizens from within its borders" kind of thing. The Oh, The Places You'll Go thread is a place to add in character locations to the world (so as long as they don't have space ships or overt magic, and as long as they fit the semi-medieval, semi-modern, semi-steampunk style theme) etc.

Ok, I'll just edit my old post, if that's ok, or should I create a new one?

Just edit the old one, that'll be fine

Just edit the old one, that'll be fine

I have now...
Is this better?

Just edit the old one, that'll be fine

I have now...
Is this better?

Yup, that's approved! Welcome on board Take a look at the map in the first post of the Interest thread for the RP and work out what areas you've been through/where you want Kort to be roughly.

@Weissreich

Do I just pretend that Kort is there or will it be edited in future?

@Weissreich

Do I just pretend that Kort is there or will it be edited in future?

Work out where on the map you want it and I'll put it on there and update it.

@Weissreich I'd like Kört in the middle of the indent of land east of Hercle, please, 

Also can you remember the "double dot accent" (I only call it that because i don't know what it's called.) above Kört, if possible.
And also, how long will it take to be updated?

@Nutjob7 Not everyone knows how to type vowels with umlauts. Don't take offense if someone doesn't do it.