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Above are approved except for N. Cetus.

N. Cetus, having healing and regeneration powers is a bit much.

I'm going to change it a bit to make him weaker. Like, he can heal others but not himself?

That would be fine, but I think having to heal himself instead of a passive regeneration would work as well.

Can we get given a sense of a setting? Or do you know when you're gonna start this, cuz I'm looking forward to it haha

Name: Ayla Fellvarda

Age: 22

Alignment: Neutral

General appearance: A slender woman with long white hair with small black and blue tribal tattoos under her eyes. Typically wears war paint on her body reminiscent of her heritage and prefers to dress in black leather boots with a green or white dress bearing the Ouroboros wreathed in laurels on the chest, the emblem of her native land.

Personality: She is stoic and diminutive, preferring to leave the talking to others until it involves her skill in combat. She loves animals and has befriended many but her true friend and companion is a loyal hawk named Ethos.

Combat skills (and weapons): Arya is proficient in the manipulation of molecules and atoms through telekinesis, allowing her almost magic like abilities such as being able to charge electrons for a burst of electric energy or causing oxygen to combust by condensing it to a combustible density and charging the air to produce a spark. She can also direct the atoms of various solids and liquids to form to her will, however this causes a massive decrease of energy proportional to the size/amount/density of the object/fluid and easily makes her vulnerable. She also carries a sword but is not nearly as proficient with it as her molecule manipulation.

Other skills (and tools): She possesses extraordinary tracking and stealth abilities from her homeland and is a brilliant strategist making her a natural leader.

History: Arya was born a princess in a nation that was an undeveloped isolationist kingdom that had a rich culture and standard of living. This did not mean however, that she was treated in a Disney definition of the term. She was taught the secrets of the royal family's ability to manipulate molecules through rigorous mental energy training, and progressed at a rate that far exceeded any previous family member, while also learning to track and hunt. However due to her proficiency in molecular manipulation, she opted out of the standard bow that was used by the royal family and chose to instead hunt with her ability, as her level of precision in her strikes had never before been seen. Her lifestyle changed though when the outside world discovered her mostly hidden nation, and desiring the land rich in resources, began warring with the kingdom. The nations forces were decimated and, in the fray, General West discovered Arya's ability and captured her for testing before killing her family. However, he did not plan on her violent escape from their testing chambers. Arya fought her way out of the compound but not before she ripped General West apart atom by atom for his crimes. This left Arya near death from the energy required and, if it had not been for a member of the party, she would have succumbed.

Major weaknesses: While proficient at long range, her molecular manipulation is dangerous to herself and team mates at close range. She is not proficient with her short range weapon making her incredibly vulnerable to head on attacks. The affore-mentioned molding of solids and liquids for example raising an earth wall for protection leaves her exhausted due to high amounts of energy used in the act, so if she has to defend herself or her teammates, she will inevitably have to rely a great deal on them to get her out of an immediate bind.

Motivation for joining the party: Vowing to never let this tragedy occur again, she joined the party of the man who saved her to satisfy this life need.

We seem to have three loud or straight up and two stealthy, good combo/balance in my opinion.

I agree. That's not too bad a balance, there can be NPC's written in I think.

@Ducky, that character is very powerful. Might want to limit interaction with humans or something otherwise that's just an instant kill on anyone getting close to her, which sorta cancels out the being rubbish at hand-to-hand/close-range physical combat.

Name: Nicholas Arken

Age: 19

Alignment: Neutral Good

General appearance: Lanky male with black hair and dark eyes. His forearms up to his wrists are jet-black in contrast with his otherwise lightly-tanned skin. He wears tees in warm and moderate weather and short-sleeved jackets (which look kinda dumb) in the cold.

Personality: Nick isn't a man of extremes. His upbringing instilled in him an affinity for the careful medium. He has few strong beliefs besides his trust in science (and therefore scientists). He generally doesn't speak unless spoken to, not because he's untalkative, but because that is the environment he grew up in.

Combat skills (and weapons): Nick has the ability to create magnetic fields around his hands that can pull and/or heat metal. Both of these are fairly powerful to the point where he can reasonably heat a hand-gun sized piece of metal in about four seconds and pull his entire body weight toward an object (not quickly, but at a decent speed) that has more mass than he does. He carries short-bladed knives that he can project toward enemies.

Other skills (and tools): He wears gloves made of interlocking ceramic scales to protect his hands when he is heating metal. He has a great deal of dexterity after extensive practice with pulling dangerous things toward himself and moving out of the way.

History: Nick is the result of a genetic modification initiative to create various specialized types of soldier. He was one of the first and was therefore a prototype never meant to see the field. The researchers tested his abilities, the physiological and psychological ramifications, and just generally controlled his existence for the first fifteen years of his life. He was treated well overall, and though he was taught how to use his ability in combat, it was purely for testing purposes and he wasn't conditioned to think like a soldier. When Nick was fifteen, a combination of public outrage at the human rights infringement and governmental realization of how long the research would take caused the research facility to lose its funding and shut down. Nick lived in the abandoned facility for a while afterward, but he soon ran out of food and ventured out into the world. His encounters with normal people were really odd at first, but he managed to become only slightly strange and integrate into society.

Major weaknesses: Use of his ability produces heat (originating from his arms) proportional to the forces created by his ability. Therefore, he can overheat (heat stroke at the least, combustion if he's pushing himself to the point of death) while using his ability extensively. His energy comes from light and heat, so he has to be in the sun for a significant amount of time every day to be truly effective. Also, his combat skills besides his ability are only average. Oh, and his ability tends to mess up (temporarily OR permanently) electronics.

Motivation for joining the party: He has no civilian skills, so the party is pretty much his chance at having a decent livelihood.

Both are approproed.

I'm kinda waiting for the weekend to start this, kinda waiting for Wintermoot to make a character, as he's shown interest, and it's difficult to add characters in the very beginning.

Sorry! I keep meaning to do this, and things keep coming up...I will try my best to get it done before the weekend.

We starting or not?

Shhhhhhhh, all will be well. Only dreams now.

wintermoot pls

Cetus, why not have the ability to heal people but only by absorbing some of the symptoms yourself?

Since I still have time as it seems



Name: Phoenix

Age: 14

Alignment:Chaotic Neutral

General appearance:Tall, slightly lanky, with Black hair and blue eyes. Is Caucasian, and has spider bites, sometimes Cat ears and a tail can be seen. He is roughly 5'3" and is 95 lbs.

Personality:A bit standoff-ish, but rather nice and friendly once you get to know him. He hates being forced into society's mold, and is a bit of a loner.

Combat skills (and weapons): Loves Archery and is an okay shot. He usually has a bow and 5 arrows with him.

Other skills (and tools): Is really good at hacking and program design, he usually keeps a usb drive with him at all times which contains his 'tools' so to speak. He can 'Revive' however it can not be through natural causes(Natural Disasters, Old Age, Disease, ect.) and takes roughly three days to be revived, and a week before full strength is returned, this only is for himself. He can also learn things rather quickly

History: A Normal kid whom, after various experiments on him by his father, grew ears and tail. Being ostracized at the age of 6 he learned a lot about computers, which was a side effect of his experiments(Increased Learning Abilities).

Major weaknesses: Mortality, Water, Tuna, Dogs, Tail and Ears, Natural Events

Motivation for joining the party: He seems to have little motivation other than finding the base and having nothing better to do.

If this is not needed, then well, just ignore this.

Seems a bit underpowered, but I'll take it.