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I don't know if I completely occur with that last thing.

I would say go with what you feel is best...you seem to be on the right track.

I don't know if I completely occur with that last thing.

I would say go with what you feel is best...you seem to be on the right track.

If I have to have a demon, he better have an attractive form...

So, query. What do you find attractive in a guy? I'm mainly talking facial expressions here, but anything rolls. Keep in mind it's to help the person who is going to be rendering Zaphyr

Thanks, although I was actually expecting you to answer my previous query to Reon

Well, statistically I find guys with uncut dicks to be attractive, according to my recent survey of my porn collection.

You said anything rolls.

Well played.

But seriously, I trust your tastes in this manner.

Hey everyone,

Big news! We now have the sketch of Zaphyr ready for review. It's at this stage that any major changes can be made, so do post if you think things need modifying. I'll then pass your feedback back. Do be aware that our artist can see this thread.

For reference, here is the original request:

Short white hair and pale eyes, with more face visible than the image reference shows. The hoody should be a dark blue, and have the Wintreath tree as a badge on one arm. Zaphyr should be wearing trousers, non-descript and dark, cloth like material, and dark trainers, with his hands perhaps in his pockets.

And without further ado, here is Zaphyr's sketch (likely to be a temporary link): https://www.dropbox.com/s/6amr4bouv2ic8ad/Commission_Zaphyr.jpg?dl=0

Wow, that was fast! ^.^

I for one think the sketch is excellent as is. I can't think of any possible improvements.

Thanks for commissioning this effort.

I have some mixed feelings about the cuffed pants around his ankles...
Both stylistically and thinking from where the character comes from having them that cuffed or separate would be a disadvantage.

But, it's a tiny nitpick... Otherwise I think this looks totally and completely fantastic!

You don't find it stylish, Reon?

I'm from seattle. It is very wet here and we all kind of wear the same thing in varying colors... The only time I see clothes like that is on tourists or in British TV shows worn by... What's the slang... Townies? I think...
So no... I don't think it's stylish...

Thank you for your feedback!

Changes have been made to the sketch as posted and the trousers have been simplified to remove the cuffs.

Sketch linky: https://www.dropbox.com/s/6amr4bouv2ic8ad/Commission_Zaphyr.jpg?dl=0

I may be crazy... But that looks the same... Did you... Double the link right...

You said you didn't like the cuffs and now you can't even notice that they're gone. ;-; I hate to offer an opposite opinion to Reon's madness, but I looking at both versions I actually liked the cuffs...they looked rather stylish to me.

I don't have an exact idea yet, but I'm thinking he needs an accessory...something to help him stand out as a unique individual more. Or some touches to the same effect when it comes to his clothing. His face is per-fect. Let's not touch it. Else it may shatter.

Also, thanks Wuufu and Kirara-CecilVenes for your generosity, skill, and patience.

Alright, cuffs definitely has different meaning between the four of us...
At the bottom of his pants, it is tight against his leg. That is called cuffing when you sew. So they're cuffs... Those are definitely still there or I have gone really really insane...

And yes, thank you human artist for being patient and kind and not judging me, who is a complete stranger to you, for these weird and apparently insane comments...