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[DRAFT] Fundamental Law Amendment Styling Act
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Chanku
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    Title
    1. This act is to be cited as the Fundamental Laws Amendment XII

    Amendments
    2. Article VII of the Fundamental Laws is re-titled as "Amendments"
    3. Article VII, Section 2 of the Fundamental Laws is amended to read as follows:
    Quote
    The Storting shall have the authority to propose amendments to these Fundamental Laws by a two-thirds supermajority vote of both the Underhusen and Overhusen.
    4. Article VII, Section 3 of the Fundamental Laws is amended to read as follows:
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    Any amendment to these Fundamental Laws passed by the Storting is considered ratified if approved by both the Monarch and by a two-thirds supermajority in favor of the Citizens of Wintreath voting at referendum.

    I'm reintroducing this bill, it merely changes the styling of Article XII of the Fundamental Laws. Also, a neat little thing I noticed, it's amending Article XII, and this is the 12th amendment to the Fundamental Laws that we have passed, as such the title both describes the Number of this amendment and the article it is amending!.
    Nvm Somehow I managed to fuck this up both when I first drafted this, and also when I was looking at the Fundamental Laws to make sure everything was right.
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    « Last Edit: November 06, 2018, 02:34:38 AM by Chanku »
    See you later space cowboy.
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    Katie
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  • From looking at the Fundamental Laws it seems there are only 7 sections, not twelve. This act would be modifying Article VII. Correct me if I'm mistaken.
    Lady Katherine Ostergaard
    Countess of Osterfell, Matriarch of the Noble House of Ostergaard


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    Chanku
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  • Thanks, I have no idea how I got that wrong o.O
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    See you later space cowboy.
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    Arenado
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  • I think its a bit redundant to say 'two-thirds super majority', more succinct to just say 'two-thirds majority'.
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  • I highly disagree, additionally it conforms with the style set in the rest of the Fundamental Laws.
    See you later space cowboy.
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  • I highly disagree, additionally it conforms with the style set in the rest of the Fundamental Laws.
    Yeah, the 2/3 is meant to explain what is meant by supermajority.
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  • Ok.
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  • How much more time do we have for debate?
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  • Since it has now been 7 days since the initial post, I move that we vote on this. Also North, it's as simple as looking at the Procedural Rules. The limit is 5 days.
    Lady Katherine Ostergaard
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      • Fmr. Jarl of Foreign Affairs
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      • Fmr. Officer of Information in the 29th-34th Sessions of the Underhusen
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      • Fmr. Thane of Embassies

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  • I second.
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