Post #101622
August 02, 2017, 07:31:17 PM
[Ooh, narration that doesn't happen in front of our characters, that we need to ignore IC, but which adds to the situation, I'm used to dealing with that.
Though, with my knowledge of narrative structure, I should have realized earlier that there was no way we could just make a plan and expect it to just work, there would be no drama or uncertainty if that happened. Naturally the raid had to begin immediately after agreeing to a plan. That or something had to explode, though maybe that would also result in the raid beginning immediately anyway.]
Mesmer would have a plan if she knew they were on the move towards the rooftop, but since she doesn't, all she can say is "We need more time to get to them first... how can we misdirect the police without harming them to buy time? I thought I could make it look like Andrew was escaping the building, but it's a little late for that now."