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  • Alright here's a post I did on another forum quite a while back on the Races of Mithra.

    Please keep in mind this lore is work in progress and as such is subject to change. I also intend to redo this post to a better, higher quality.

    The Races of Mithra. (Now updated)
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  • Causal fantasy!!

    The story of Jeddiam is pretty sad. Cool as heck, because of Lore, but sad in content. Gotta love mythology. Poor dragons under the Sarvanists. Hopefully things improve for them.

    Mendier are pretty interesting, and I'm wondering how they showed up. Someone dun goofed with magic way back when? Ancient civilization had a genetics lab? (Rhetorical questions, don't answer that).

    Dwarves! I hoped there were dwarves. Dwarves are cool and more boss than elves are.

    So western/northern elves are isolationist while eastern elves co-exist with humans. Neat. Two thousand years seems a little too long a life.

    Ah, that makes more sense for Marius. Silly stories taking all the credit. So these are written semi-in-universe?
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  • Well these days all the elves co-exist with humanity, the northern elves did so entirely involuntarily. The western elves for the most part also co-exist with the Eclenians though you'd be hard pressed to find an elf in Burjion, and if you did they'd probably be hanging from a tree with a brand of the Commissariat in their chest. I mean even the isolated Free Elven State of Madedla maintains an alliance with the Eclenians.

    The vast majority of elves do not live to be 2,000 years old mostly due to disease and other unnatural causes of death. But to give an example of a rather long-lived elf that still stands to this day is the half-elf Lady Eleanor Aspada the daughter of Gaius Aspada, who for a long time lived in the Imperial Palace with her family, but after seeing them kill and backstab each other so much, she decided to move to Madedla to stay with her mother's kin but she is still very much alive in the 1880's.

    Yes these are semi-in-universe for the sake of entertainment and to provoke questions.

    Crush and I are working to put more of our own spin on both the elves and dwarves, but for now, they're rather generic.

    Also when you said PC character earlier, might I ask what you meant? The only term of PC I know is Politically Correct, but I assumed you mean protagonist character.


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  • Causal fantasy!!

    The story of Jeddiam is pretty sad. Cool as heck, because of Lore, but sad in content. Gotta love mythology. Poor dragons under the Sarvanists. Hopefully things improve for them.
    Jeddiam is pretty sad, but thats why I love the story! I've not done much writing for this besides hammering out the mythology itself, but his story is one of my favourite.
    Mendier are pretty interesting, and I'm wondering how they showed up. Someone dun goofed with magic way back when? Ancient civilization had a genetics lab? (Rhetorical questions, don't answer that).

    It might be rhetorical, but your less wrong then you think.... Don't know if Fortis will ever get into that part though, I don't know much about it myself :P

    Dwarves! I hoped there were dwarves. Dwarves are cool and more boss than elves are.
    Of course there are dwarves! I play dwarf fortress! I couldn't make them a sock loving hivemind though, to my disappointment :P

    So western/northern elves are isolationist while eastern elves co-exist with humans. Neat. Two thousand years seems a little too long a life.
    Two thousand years might seem long, then you remember Tolkiens elves live theoretically FOREVER. :P
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  • The vast majority of elves do not live to be 2,000 years old mostly due to disease and other unnatural causes of death.
    Thing is, life forms that have long life spans tend to breed slower. If they are dying out long beforehand, things may get messy. Unless magic = long lives, or Genetics happened. Or their kids hop out of their brains fully grown like Athena from Greek mythology. Then again, the fact that they do die from unnatural causes would offset things a lot. Nevermind then! =D
    Also when you said PC character earlier, might I ask what you meant? The only term of PC I know is Politically Correct, but I assumed you mean protagonist character.
    You got it pretty much correct, although I was meaning Player Character. It looked a lot like  The Main Characters Do Everything (TV Tropes warning).
    It might be rhetorical, but your less wrong then you think.... Don't know if Fortis will ever get into that part though, I don't know much about it myself :P
    Consider my interest piqued.
    Two thousand years might seem long, then you remember Tolkiens elves live theoretically FOREVER. :P
    They also were a dying race that didn't have any kids and didn’t hang with the pathetic lower races. I mean, they were magic and stuff.
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  • Elves? Ah, the lowest of the low. Such tall, magnificent egotistical homicidal maniacs in fantasy! (But elves are fun tbh)

    Dwarves? I like dwarves. They add narrative and shit *starts humming the Song of Durin* dwarves are always good.

    Dragons? Dragons are honestly my favorite fantasy species to write. The might and majesty of them is captivating. For example my dragons of all variants originate in far ancient Japan (like 90,000 years ago idk) and there are the four dragon clans, Forn, Welniko, Dalgros, and Ruina Imper. Dragons are always fun to see the different interpretations of.

    Wolfkin? This pleases the Wolf God. It returns merit to the 40 legions of the Dawn Wolves and the glories of the Dawn Forge. *shameless self advertising*
    But in all actuality they look like a fun species to have, though I would probably be guilty of making one that somehow managed to live for an extra thousand years and is patiently waiting to unleash the gods and decimate all lower life forms. Or is also a god in its own right, I'd be guilty of that too, so meh.

    But intelligent species lists are always good!
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  • Hello, and welcome to the second part of the history of Eclenia, today I will be quickly going over the rest of the Aspada Dynasty, then the Eclenian War of Succession in the mid 16th century Gregorian calendar. Finally I’ll quickly pass over the Second Imperial Dynasty of Eclenia, the time of the Andolo Dynasty.
     
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  • I looked to Tolkien and Warhammer Fantasy for the original inspiration for my elves, (But if I ever take a look at BCE in detail they start to look a lot more Tamrielic in their politics,)

    Baruk Khazad! Khazad Ai Menu! *Sings song of Durin*

    The Dragons in Mithra are a big mixed bag, one you come across could be equal to Merlin in a massive scalely form, and the next you come across will try to eat you because you smell like the colour purple, one of the other things I forgot to mention is that a good number of them are at this point senile...

    The Wolfkin are a funny bunch, scary, but funny.  :P

    Glad you liked it Gatto!

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  • I love the lore of this world in its fullness. It is all beautifully developed.

    So my only question for know is do the Mendier (specifically the Wolfkin) have their own gods? If not you can cannibalize an old and defunct version of my lore for Royan. Granted it's a version before Royan even became Royan.

    But it consists of the Wild Gods, a pantheon of Human/animal hybrids that shift between both forms or exist half and half. I don't use them simply because the lore has evolved far beyond them. The Wild Gods though have servant species such as the Bearkyn and the Wolfkyn to act as the chosen vessels of their will.

     In my lore they were ruled by Cernunnos, the Horned God, or sometimes called the Green Man. The Wild King of the Wild Lords. Now the Wild Lords only existed for the major carnivores/herbivores, they also had their own political relations based around diet and species relations. Such fun.

    Take them if you want I don't care, if you don't that's fine too. If you do take them modify them all you want, my only request is you keep the name of the Wolf God, Ze'ev Domi (Ze'ev is Hebrew for wolf while Domi is a modified version of the Latin word Dominus meaning Lord) 'aight, I'll be done self advertising tonight.
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  • Good question, in essence, no the Mendier do not have their own gods. However, they play a very big part in the mythologies of the various nations, the Wolfkin, in particular, have an incredible bond with the Bothnians with more than a couple Wolfkin appearing as heroes in Bothnian history.

    There are also some Siglaeism based folk religions that have popped up among the Felesons in Eclenia as well.

    I will consider cannibalising some of those names from your old lore for the aforementioned folk religions.

    Thank you, glad you liked the new posts, not sure if you got around to the second Eclenia post as it is huge and it's rather late. But anyways hope you have a good night.

    To everybody else when you get the chance I'd love to hear your thoughts on the second part in Eclenia's history.
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  • I did read the second part of the history and thought it was pretty great. It makes the Eclenian Empire just that much more believable, because not everything always goes good for the Empire.

    But Night y'all!
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  • Hello everybody and welcome to the third post on the history of Eclenia. Today we will be going over the Sotiris Dynasty.  :D

    I hope you all enjoy it, and please feel free to give me feedback it really helps  8)
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  • Hey guys just leaving a reminder that there's a new part of the Eclenian history lore, it seems to have been buried under other posts. I'd love to hear your thoughts on it and expect a new piece of lore to be released before the fourth and final part of the Eclenian history series. I'll also be taking the Eclenian history down and replacing it with better-edited versions since my mentor read it and found the writing quality terrible. Which I'll admit to.


    Anyways, I hope you have a good day and thank you again for taking an interest in the lore of my universe.

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  • Hey everybody and welcome to the next instalment of lore from Mithra, today I'm going to discuss the Haragladians.

    I hope you enjoy, and please feel free to leave some thoughts and feedback it really helps.  8)
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  • I'm a bit late this time around.

    The Dynasty post is great, really captures quality of rulers and history of a nation.

    The Haragladian post is interesting indeed. Personally I'd say the reason for such low birth rates is an incompatibility within the genome leading to a decrease in successful births.

    Haragladian history just seems pretty great in of itself though.
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