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The Procedural Rules of the Underhusen Act Amendment I
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Toms
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    Preface: In order to help prevent future problems created by the Underhusen Procedures Act as it was passed in haste, and to make sure there are no problems when it comes to Overriding the Overhusen.

    1.Title
     a.This is Hereby called The Procedural Rules of the Underhusen Act Amendment I
    2.Overriding
     a.The Override shall have 24-hours, or until the next bill is voted on, to begin
     b.The Override needs the super-majority to pass
     c.The Override shall begin with a motion to Override in the original topic, it must then be seconded by another
         Underhusen Member

    Right, a few issues here. Mainly that this, like the number of votes to pass something normally, is something that should be covered in the Constitution. Oh, and no prefaces. :P
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  • Ditto what Toms said.

    * Denth Rowan thanks Speaker Toms.
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    Chanku
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  • The Preface servers more of a function here. I don't see the problem with a preface. Also the reason why I defined the fact it needs a super-majority is to fill a gap, so to speak, until the Constitution is passed, I also added a new section that will make sure that it's removed when no longer needed.
    See you later space cowboy.
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    Current Positions in Wintreath
    Matriarch of House Kaizer
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    Advisor to the Riksråd
    Positions I've held
    Riksrad(1st Jarl of Information, 3rd Jarl of Foreign Affairs, 2nd Jarl of Defense)
    Member of the WHR
    Speaker of the Underhusen (3rd)
    Speaker Pro Tempore of the Underhusen (1st)
    Underhusen Member (1st-3rd)
    Member of the 5th Overhusen
    Chairman of the 5th Overhusen
    6th Underhusen
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    Mandate Holder for Jarl of Defense
    Member of the 8th Storting (Underhusen)
    Royalty of Wintreath
    Ambassador for the Department of Foreign Affairs.
    Underhusen Terms I've been a part of
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    2nd Underhusen
    3rd Underhusen
    6th Underhusen
    8th Underhusen
    Overhusen Terms I've been a part of
    5th Overhusen
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    Kestar - Child of Wintermoot (REMOVED)
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    Toms
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  • The Preface servers more of a function here. I don't see the problem with a preface. Also the reason why I defined the fact it needs a super-majority is to fill a gap, so to speak, until the Constitution is passed, I also added a new section that will make sure that it's removed when no longer needed.

    See, now this leads back to my point that the Constitution should really be passed before anything else. Besides that, the proposal doesn't state where to put the new section, nor does it say what is being overridden except in the preface, which shouldn't be the case. In addition, what if the next bill is voted on in an hour? That doesn't give the Underhusen a whole lot of time to act. Back to my main issue though, you could pass hundreds of laws to fill the gap, but it would be better to just write the constitution! :P
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    Chanku
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  • Again, this is just to help fix a few problems I realized there was. If you want to try and re-word or fix it, then be my guest and I will add it to my bill, or you can propose your own. Besides it might be a month before the constitution is finished.
    See you later space cowboy.
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    Current Positions in Wintreath
    Matriarch of House Kaizer
    Speaker of the 29th Underhusen
    Advisor to the Riksråd
    Positions I've held
    Riksrad(1st Jarl of Information, 3rd Jarl of Foreign Affairs, 2nd Jarl of Defense)
    Member of the WHR
    Speaker of the Underhusen (3rd)
    Speaker Pro Tempore of the Underhusen (1st)
    Underhusen Member (1st-3rd)
    Member of the 5th Overhusen
    Chairman of the 5th Overhusen
    6th Underhusen
    Speaker of the 6th Underhusen
    Mandate Holder for Jarl of Defense
    Member of the 8th Storting (Underhusen)
    Royalty of Wintreath
    Ambassador for the Department of Foreign Affairs.
    Underhusen Terms I've been a part of
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    2nd Underhusen
    3rd Underhusen
    6th Underhusen
    8th Underhusen
    Overhusen Terms I've been a part of
    5th Overhusen
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    Kaizer - Matriarch (REFORMED)
    Kestar - Child of Wintermoot (REMOVED)
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    Toms
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  • * Toms beats on the Underhusen with a stick

    "4. Nullification
     a. Section 2, sub-section B shall be nullified when the Constitution is passed with a section on Overriding the   
         Overhusen"

    Constitution passed people, you can get rid of this part :P
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  • Sorry, it's the holidays. Anywho I will work on updating that.
    See you later space cowboy.
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    Current Positions in Wintreath
    Matriarch of House Kaizer
    Speaker of the 29th Underhusen
    Advisor to the Riksråd
    Positions I've held
    Riksrad(1st Jarl of Information, 3rd Jarl of Foreign Affairs, 2nd Jarl of Defense)
    Member of the WHR
    Speaker of the Underhusen (3rd)
    Speaker Pro Tempore of the Underhusen (1st)
    Underhusen Member (1st-3rd)
    Member of the 5th Overhusen
    Chairman of the 5th Overhusen
    6th Underhusen
    Speaker of the 6th Underhusen
    Mandate Holder for Jarl of Defense
    Member of the 8th Storting (Underhusen)
    Royalty of Wintreath
    Ambassador for the Department of Foreign Affairs.
    Underhusen Terms I've been a part of
    1st Underhusen
    2nd Underhusen
    3rd Underhusen
    6th Underhusen
    8th Underhusen
    Overhusen Terms I've been a part of
    5th Overhusen
    Families I've been a part of
    Kaizer - Matriarch (REFORMED)
    Kestar - Child of Wintermoot (REMOVED)
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