@Fortis Scriptor Thanks. Wondrous and fun are always goals of mine. =D
Two things. First, I could not keep ideas for this out of my head (which is good for my chances!) and second, I realized about half a minute after I posted that the main character's name starts with an E. Great job,
Elb, you dingus. Third thing, November features two days in which I have exams (and one essay) so I'm hedging my bets and giving myself some wiggle room. I'll be removing anything I type early from my "official" count at the end of the month, but it'll make me feel better. I dunno.
By the way, I cut off mid-paragraph in this part. The best way to ensure you keep writing is to know exactly where you're going next, so since I'd gone over the word requirement for the day I left it alone. I'll likely be editing that last paragraph a touch when I put out the next part, but for now it'll be my incentive. Also, designing character voices on the fly is a pain.
By Chance To Dream Set 1: The Pursuit Of Happiness, Part 2/?
Count: 1,671 / 3,340Waking up was disorientating. But then, it always was, wasn’t it? If teleportation existed, Edward would wager he could write entire collections on the hows and the whys and the various similarities between them.
Sometimes, Edward was in a vibrant castle, stained glass windows glowing in indiscernible patterns. Cries of dragons filled his ears and his heart raced in shared delight or fear, and fear. He raced down the open fields after a Dreamer or leading a Dreamer away from a Nightmare. He’d take up a sword and make use of rusty fencing skills, or even better, he’s grab a broom and learn to fly.
Sometimes, he found find himself in a maze of twisting passages, all alike, with dirt under his nails from unspecified labour. Edward walked down those halls and shed from whispering, cobweb ghosts lurking just around the corner, and he’d call up a siren to shatter the looming atmosphere. Play some hard rock, most Nightmares couldn’t work out how to twist hard rock faster than Edward could sprint.
Sometimes, waterfalls cascaded from great floating islands, held aloft by imagination and wonder, and Edward strolled down them and among the silk-soft trees. Armed with a water pistol, he’d extinguish the flames long before the Dreamer could even notice something was wrong.
Sometimes, an assembly hall would sit in front of him, and he’d need to stop a teenager from crying his eyes out and letting a Nightmare feed on his anxieties.
But every time, every single time, Edward would stop being there, in the fantastic, in the wonder, in the dream. And every time he’d end up in the same place.
REMission, the operation floor, the chamber of dreams and likely secrets too.
Going back to the essay-collection concept, Edward could boil the entire collection to one sentence: those worlds are real. Strictly speaking, literally speaking, Edward was wrong. Dreams are not literally “real.” They are only real to two people. Dreamer and Jumper, until death do them part, and the Link if Edward wanted to be fancy about it. But only his head and the Dreamer’s head would ever witness the world the dream crafted. With the capsule Edward was always hooked up to, the dream elevated itself from flickering sparks in the Dreamer’s head into, well, something Edward could touch. Sort of.
The point Edward was trying to make, in the half-asleep, jerked aware state he was stuck in, was that teleportation would be disorientating because no matter how perfect the teleport was, the subject would come out amongst differences. Temperature, smells, slight adjustments to gravity and background sounds that the subconscious would scream in alarm at.
In the darkness Edward swallowed.
Well.
Edward had many opportunities to think about this.
See, there was always a pause between waking up and the capsule unlocking. Edward could open it. There was an emergency lever in case of, well, emergencies. But he always needed a minute to work out where all his limbs were. And while he did that, Edward was free to wonder at the universe and come up with convoluted and frankly ridiculous and pointless hypothetical essays.
Like how teleportation would feel just like how Edward felt. Fuck his life. What was he thinking about? Right, teleportation. What about it?
Awareness clicked back into place. He grunted, the sound shockingly loud in the dark. Edward twitched his fingers, one after the other, then his toes. Wait, scratch that. With a huff, Edward went back to his fingers. Distal middle proximal. Wrist elbow shoulder. Toes ankle knee. Jaw. Tongue.
Edward immediately wished he had not moved his tongue. Every single time, without fail, wasn’t life just the greatest. At least he hadn’t bit it that time round.
The wonderful thing about not thinking clearly was that it was nearly impossible to pinpoint one is not thinking clearly from inside one’s head. Everyone’s at least a little bit crazy. Still, Edward’s grateful that Marama didn’t have access to his brain when it disconnected from the capsule.
A light blinked on. It was a soft red shade, but even so Edward screwed his eyes shut again. A headache flared. It pulsed between his eyes but faded as his eyes adjusted. Experience taught him that it was a warning. But not a warning for equipment failing or that something had gone dreadfully wrong. No, that light was a bright yellow designed to hock the Jumper as awake as possible.
The red light was a warning. For him.
Edward stifled a groan and covered his eyes. It wouldn’t help. But he could dream. That was his day job.
Droning, dull beeps filled the capsule -- a countdown -- and then a line of light stabbed Edward through the eyeball and into the brain, leaving no survivors. He’d been doing the dance for three years but it still burned to step out of the darkness. The line split the ceiling in two, then parted and widened, the sides lowering enough for Edward to reach, blindly, to the outside. He could feel sweat making his clothing stick to him. Joy upon joys.
A trio of snapped fingers caught his attention. Edward let his hands drop, wincing at the light, and glanced the clicker’s way.
‘Morning, sunshine,’ the floor nurse said dryly. Edward glanced at her nametag. Deva Derring. Right, her. ‘It’s five to seven in the evening, you’ve been in there for three hours, thirty eight minutes, bunch of seconds, two cycles registered.’
‘Not bad,’ Edward said. He swung his legs out of the capsule. ‘I don’t suppose I can skip the health check?’
Deva perched her hand on her hip. Except, not quite, she held her hand in the right position but didn’t let her hand make contact with her sides. Nurses. ‘Yeah nah, that sounds like a real quick way to get brownie points round here.’
‘Is that a yes?’
‘Nope,’ she said, popping the p. ‘Arm.’
Edward begrudgingly gave it, Deva snatching his wrist and holding it against his chest. Her head slightly tilted, nodding to a rhythm Edward couldn’t see. It would take her three minutes, at least, to be satisfied. In the meantime Edward worked on re-orientating himself.
The operation floor was low-lit. It mimicked the dusk air that must have been outside, with cool blue lights being the dominant shade. Rows of blue LEDs sat to mark pathways between capsules and the doors, marking the areas that must be kept clear at all times. It was like an airplane at night. Other beads of light crept around monitors and edges, but they were small enough not to interrupt the strictly dim room.
Each of the blue lights streamed down from the distant ceiling. It was at least two stories high, and Edward knew that for a fact because the second story windows faced into the floor. From Edward’s perspective they were black. He wasn’t certain about any of the science, but he did know the usual white office lights were sharp and pressing to the other side. The Link rooms had a clear view into the operation floor, for example, and they were brightly lit. Same with the hallways and the break rooms beyond. Somewhere up there, Marama was shutting her equipement down, stretching, and presumably heading off to her break. That, or she was taking a gander at the view and Edward having his hand held by a nurse.
But then, the low light of the operation floor made it resist observations.
On a normal day there were ten capsules. Those shed the most light in the room other than the blue. Most were not filled. It was a standard procedure to have more capsules than necessary, for you never knew when an emergency would strike. From what Edward could see there were three others sealed and switched on. Someone’s shift started between Edward’s start and his end. The capsules were like coffins, smooth and white ones with their gullets stuffed with machinery and a tank behind the Jumper’s head, just for fun. The grand toilets of coffins, they’d once joked. They sat in two rows, with a corridor of lights down the centre.
At every occupied capsule was at least one of the floor nurses. The nearest, Paul, Edward could hear speaking quietly into a headset. Other floor nurses crossed the floor, files under arms and stern expressions being worn. If Edward’s eyes weren’t deceiving him, it looked like there was some trouble in paradise.
‘Sam and Eri,’ Deva said. Edward glanced back and yes, it looked like she was well aware of Edward’s staring. ‘Murder witness, I think.’
Edward hissed between his teeth. ‘How’s it looking?’
‘Paul’s worried. You know, the usual.’ A smile crept over Deva’s features. ‘No actual health issues but everyone spare’s on alert. Should be done by your next shift.’
‘When did he head in?’
‘Must’ve been… hm.’ She absently snapped her fingers, staring into open space. ‘An hour after you, at least, so--’
Deva jumped, her free hand darting to her ear.
‘...Gbeho says head out,’ Deva said. With a sigh, she tapped Edward’s hand against his chest. ‘Lucky for you your resps are fine. Get some rest, get some food, see you if you’re at my bench next shift.’
Edward nodded his acknowledgement. She did help him stand, shooed him along by a metre, and then hurried off to join the other nurses whispering over Paul’s shoulders. She peeled off quickly and vanished out one of the door, headed to the bay, Edward would wager. Edward on the other hand had a different door. Namely, the exit. He crossed as quickly as he could without running. Down the blue lines, along the-- dear lord it really was an airplane, wasn’t it? Anyway, Edward headed for the exit.
The main doors of the operation floor were the way Deva just went, to where the nurses had their wings of operation, and the flood doors. Oh, and the actual door Edward and other Jumpers used. The flood doors were strictly for emergencies.
Man, I'm excited for November. Who's excited? I'm excited.