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Title
1. This act shall be cited as the Taulover Commendation Act.

Recognition
2. The region of Wintreath recognizes the accomplishments, contributions, and services to Wintreath by taulover, included but not limited to:
a) Significant contributions to the Underhusen as Skrifa for seven terms, including 4 terms as Speaker and Speaker pro-tempore, and their current position as Librarian of the Underhusen,
b) Significant contributions to Wintreath's reputation abroad as ambassador to several regions such as Balder and INWU who have become close allies,
c) Contributions to Wintreath's Foreign Affairs department as Thane of Embassy Dispatches/Foreign Affairs & as a Thane of Integration,
d) Contributions to Wintreath's official publications such as the publishing and editing the publications, known as the Orendi, for over 2 years and also additional writing of the regional events and conducting several citizen interviews in the Orendi,
e) Contributions to the success of the yearly summer festival, Summersend, by promoting it and hosting several activities and games in aforementioned festival,
f) Significant contributions to roleplay and gaming in Wintreath by serving as hosts to a numerous amount of regional games, such as the hosting of one of the most active editions of the popular forum games Werewolf/Mafia and Arena,
g) His role in the founding of the region of New Hyperion and fostering of Wintreath's close connection to the region.

3. The Storting hereby awards taulover the Commendation of Wintreath.

This was done unbiased, and I think they are very well deserving!

Like the BSR commendation, I think it needs more specifics and fewer generalizations. Again, "significant contributions" such as what?

One thing that I remember specifically was his design and hosting of Werewolf XIV: A Werewolf of Fire and Ice, which was our first and only double-elimination Werewolf game, where players who were voted out of one part of the game were sent to the other part of the game. With a combined total of 524 posts across the two sections, it's the second most active completed Werewolf game, behind Werewolf VI: Until Dawn.

Werewolf XIV Trailer: https://wintreath.com/forums/index.php?topic=4958.0
Werewolf XIV Book I: https://wintreath.com/forums/index.php?topic=4969.0
Werewolf XIV Book II: https://wintreath.com/forums/index.php?topic=4970.0

I think I've added less generalizations, but if anyone has any more suggestions please tell me!

Some suggestions:
In Section 2a, I'd change "several" to seven terms as Skrifa, with four of those as Speaker/SPT.
In Section 2c, I believe it's Thane of Embassy Dispatches as the Thane of Embassies was a separate position.
In Section 2d, I'd add that he edited and published the Orendi, not just wrote and did interviews. Also the fact that he did this for over two years.
In Section 2f, I'd add that he hosted an overhauled version of the Arena forum game.

I don't know if I'm deserving of such an honor, but I suppose that's not for me to decide.

Two specific comments, since you asked me to provide: there is a period missing in section 3; and I prefer the name "taulover" to be uncapitalized (understandable if you want the title/title section to be capitalized, but I otherwise might prefer "taulover" over "Taulover").

Werewolf XIV Trailer: https://wintreath.com/forums/index.php?topic=4958.0

In Section 2d, I'd add that he edited and published the Orendi, not just wrote and did interviews. Also the fact that he did this for over two years.

I would be remiss not to point out @Hydra's contributions here. He designed the Orendi and edited it for most of this time, and he made both Werewolf XIV trailers.

Title
1. This act shall be cited as the Taulover Commendation Act.

Recognition
2. The region of Wintreath recognizes the accomplishments, contributions, and services to Wintreath by taulover, included but not limited to:
a) Significant contributions to the Underhusen as Skrifa for seven terms, including 4 terms as Speaker and Speaker pro-tempore, and their current position as Librarian of the Underhusen,
b) Significant contributions to Wintreath's reputation abroad as ambassador to several regions such as Balder and INWU who have become close allies,
c) Contributions to Wintreath's Foreign Affairs department as Thane of Embassy Dispatches/Foreign Affairs & as a Thane of Integration,
d) Contributions to Wintreath's official publications such as the publishing and editing the publications, known as the Orendi, for over 2 years and also additional writing of the regional events and conducting several citizen interviews in the Orendi,
e) Contributions to the success of the yearly summer festival, Summersend, by promoting it and hosting several activities and games in aforementioned festival,
f) Significant contributions to roleplay and gaming in Wintreath by serving as hosts to a numerous amount of regional games, such as the hosting of one of the most active editions of the popular forum games Werewolf/Mafia and Arena,
g) His role in the founding of the region of New Hyperion and fostering of Wintreath's close connection to the region.

3. The Storting hereby awards taulover the Commendation of Wintreath.

This was done unbiased, and I think they are very well deserving!