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Ashton Mercer
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    Approved, with the following power explanations:

    +500% human speed and strength, the durability of an M1 Abrams.
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    Justinian Ezkantion
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  • @BP (how do I mention people here anyway?) He's a firebender from Avatar, OK? And the cartoon kind where they can make their own not the movie kind where they only manipulate existing fire.
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  • if you need to know more info on my character just ask :)
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  • @BP (how do I mention people here anyway?) He's a firebender from Avatar, OK? And the cartoon kind where they can make their own not the movie kind where they only manipulate existing fire.
    You mention people by typing @insert username here, and the forum will automatically mention them. For multiword usernames, just type them (like I did above with "insert username here"), and it still works. (Also note that mentions don't work if edited in.)
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    Cinciri
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  • Cinciri:
    my dude do you just always make a Rus', because seriously
    But yeah on to serious comments.
    What is a 'basic bow'? Followup: are his weapons etc. all made out of something fancy (comic-book fancy, like 15,000 folded meteoric iron alloyed with mithril, adamantium, y'know, fancy-sounding shit), or could he be taken out with the simple expedient of breaking his weapons first?
    How far can these bolts go? Are these like Cyclops-style, very destructive bolts, or more like an astonishingly convenient taser? You say they're not continuous - so it's kind of like a Star-Wars style blaster gun? How many can he push out in, say, a 10 second period? Can he do both hands at once?
    How high can he jump with those implants - over a house, 10 stories, over a skyscraper? Does he need to land on his feet to be okay (e.g. Portal), or does he have enhanced durability?

    Overall:
    dear god we make a thing about superhumans and y'all skew towards evil first thing
    fortunately i'm a believer in people having multiple characters
    First off Rus pants are Viking in origin my dude, and he is from Iceland.
    Basic bow means longbow, not a compound bow.
    One of his tomahawks is made from modern Damascus, but nothing innately special, though the handles are difficult to break as they are strong wood with metal supports. He is in no way weak after his weapons have been broken as he can also cause electric charges to flow through his fists if he wanted to.
    Somewhere in between destructive bolts and super-taser depends on range (point blank is very strong but rapidly turns into the later), range is at very maximum one kilometer, though at reduced efficiency.
    He has enough energy for 10 consecutive bolts, but if he expends them all at once he can recharge them naturally in about 10 minutes.
    His implants can improve his jumping ability to about 8 meters high, and if he lands on his feet he is fine, but he prefers to tuck and roll. 
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    Doc
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    We've never met, so sup. Anyway;
    How is he both crazy but lawful good? Unless you mean crazy in the most idealistic Batman sense, where he literally lets himself get the shit beat out of him on a regular basis in order to SAVE INNOCENTS (insert Whatever Happened to the Caped Crusader reference where he lets himself get killed because INNOCENTS). I contrast this with the most cynical Batman sense, where he just beats up poor, arguably defenseless people with his superior training, physique, and weaponry, and justifies it to himself by screeching CRIME and patting himself on the back for not killing, but nonetheless prides himself on putting people in traction for 8 months. That was a really long digression, but I have deeply mixed feelings about Batman, mostly because fundamentally god dammit I wanna be Batman.
    Back to your thing: yeah please explain the 'crazy but lawful good nonetheless'. Is this an Azrael sort of gig, where he's brainwashed into this psycho PRAISE GOD, KILL CRIMINALS kind of deal? The aforementioned 'I am Batman and I have a serious martyr complex' kind of deal? Or is he just honestly seriously crazy and only thinks he's lawful good because he's so crazy (I like this theory best because that's some 3deep5me shit)?
    I'm...uh...not sure how useful being #1 in his class at swordplay is. I generally didn't have swording classes at school. Besides that though, it's an origin story. It's okay. You can tell us if he made the powered armor or not. Arguably we should kind of insist, because it's the difference between being Tony Stark (genius who makes powered armor, to the extent that 'genius' is probably power #1, trumping 'powered armor' and 'ludicrous wealth', which is arguably a required secondary power for powered armor anyway unless it's some kitbashed backyard-scientist looking stuff) or James Rhodes (pretty smart dude but not 'make powered armor' smart).
    To clarify - does he have 200% strength and speed outside the suit, and 800% (400% of 200%) inside the suit, or is it 200% and 400% (or 600%, if it's supposed to be 200%+400%), and most of what the suit is adding is durability? Can he fly in the suit (Iron Man) or is it more of a kind of MJOLNIR V kind of deal? Does the suit have integrated weapons, or is it mostly, er, sword? Seeing as the sword is unmentioned, are we supposed to assume there's anything special about it, or is it just supposed to be your regular old sword?
    And now the hard part.
    The hard part
    Also I can't tell if you're a hero or a villain.

    Ashton:
    I am literally playing a superhero-themed FATE game with my usual gaming group. We do this kind of loophole finding shit all the time. Of course, for the purposes of gaming abstractions, we eliminate a lot of the 'elemental manipulation on the atomic level' kind of stuff outside of stunts or other fate point uses, and really it degenerates to 'aight I use my Shoot 6 on you, you use your Athletics 5 to dodge, rolloff fam'. But then the DM spins it into a 'Sparkboy launches a torrent of electricity at Mantis, but she pushes her jetboots into overdrive. Stray crackles of lightning dance across the surface of her armor, but the vast majority is wasted into the air. The stench of ozone fills Mantis' nose, and she knows she got lucky here - but how long can it last?'
    He's a good DM. That's what I'm getting at.
    And I mean, sure, 'peak' performance and intelligence is probably worth contending. But I'd be pretty happy with the assumption that anyone trying to play with the big boy superheroes is in the 90th percentile and up in most categories.
    I'd also like to be 100% clear that being fast, or strong, or agile in no way suggests you'd be able to survive a bullet. Knife Nut might be 4% body fat, runs a mile in 3 minutes, and can bench press a car, but he gets shot, he doesn't have an extra lung lying around. He's gonna die. ("Good," growls Nighthawk in his deep bass voice. "Death is the only suitable price for his crimes. The pocketbook of Justice has been balanced." Nighthawk is kind of an asshole, but the Justice Community accepts him because he's really cool, and more importantly he paid for their secret base. He put up a billion dollars for it, they can put up with his ancap rhetoric every so often.)
    Give me like...30 minutes to type up the rest of my PM. Maybe we can make something else work. nevermind there have been 4 new replies since I started writing this and you put up a topic already jesus fuck am I slow

    Justinian:
    It's vaguely annoying. Quotes are easier and accomplish much the same objective. Just remove the necessary content. But with me you don't really have to, because I click on threads that I'm actively interested in anyway. I'll read any reference to me eventually.
    And aight. I just wanted clarity. Although more clarity (read: more questions answered) is always a positive for everyone, because often I find that by answering questions people ask, it's an opportunity for me to just make up some shit about backstory by giving examples.

    Cinciri:
    generally when I do strikeouts i'm approximately 0% serious
    I asked about the weapons because I want to get an idea of just how much of a heavy-hitter he is. Mjolnir, for example, is generally considered unbreakable (Cate Blanchett aside, but shit those cheekbones could cut diamonds anyway), and Thor can go toe-to-toe with immensely powerful villains without worrying about losing an important part of his toolkit (which, admittedly, is pretty much entirely Mjolnir, and maybe like 2% flowing blonde locks). Deadpool, on the other hand, uses just sort of regular old weapons that he presumably buys in bulk, and so he goes through quite a few of these because they break every so often, although since he uses katanas, and everyone knows katanas are overpowered, not quite as many as you'd otherwise think. Still, when they do break, he's kinda gotta scramble for a new thing, or hope for a backup.
    but yes you the real MVP answering all my annoying questions
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    Cinciri
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  • He does have backups for all his weapons but only carries two tomahawks, one knife, and his bow (sometimes) at any one time. He can definitely hold his own without them though.
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    Fayt:
    We've never met, so sup. Anyway;
    How is he both crazy but lawful good? Unless you mean crazy in the most idealistic Batman sense, where he literally lets himself get the shit beat out of him on a regular basis in order to SAVE INNOCENTS (insert Whatever Happened to the Caped Crusader reference where he lets himself get killed because INNOCENTS). I contrast this with the most cynical Batman sense, where he just beats up poor, arguably defenseless people with his superior training, physique, and weaponry, and justifies it to himself by screeching CRIME and patting himself on the back for not killing, but nonetheless prides himself on putting people in traction for 8 months. That was a really long digression, but I have deeply mixed feelings about Batman, mostly because fundamentally god dammit I wanna be Batman.
    Back to your thing: yeah please explain the 'crazy but lawful good nonetheless'. Is this an Azrael sort of gig, where he's brainwashed into this psycho PRAISE GOD, KILL CRIMINALS kind of deal? The aforementioned 'I am Batman and I have a serious martyr complex' kind of deal? Or is he just honestly seriously crazy and only thinks he's lawful good because he's so crazy (I like this theory best because that's some 3deep5me shit)?
    I'm...uh...not sure how useful being #1 in his class at swordplay is. I generally didn't have swording classes at school. Besides that though, it's an origin story. It's okay. You can tell us if he made the powered armor or not. Arguably we should kind of insist, because it's the difference between being Tony Stark (genius who makes powered armor, to the extent that 'genius' is probably power #1, trumping 'powered armor' and 'ludicrous wealth', which is arguably a required secondary power for powered armor anyway unless it's some kitbashed backyard-scientist looking stuff) or James Rhodes (pretty smart dude but not 'make powered armor' smart).
    To clarify - does he have 200% strength and speed outside the suit, and 800% (400% of 200%) inside the suit, or is it 200% and 400% (or 600%, if it's supposed to be 200%+400%), and most of what the suit is adding is durability? Can he fly in the suit (Iron Man) or is it more of a kind of MJOLNIR V kind of deal? Does the suit have integrated weapons, or is it mostly, er, sword? Seeing as the sword is unmentioned, are we supposed to assume there's anything special about it, or is it just supposed to be your regular old sword?
    And now the hard part.
    went to a private school where he did swordsmanship. he's crazy in a "only think's he's lawful good" and yes he made the powerarmour. outside the suit he's 200% in the suit he's 600%. no can't fly. no weapons in the suit (because that's not him lol) the sword is about 7' long made from the same material as the suit. Its a little evil but is a good guy at heart.
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  • So I am a little confused about how this RP. works, and how the different character stories blend and what not
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    Ashton Mercer
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  • So I am a little confused about how this RP. works, and how the different character stories blend and what not
    I'll do my best. For starters, we have two types of stories: Open and Selective.

    Open stories, like the one we have open right now, are available for anyone who has an approved character and would care to join. The maker of the open story thread (usually will. be me, but others will be able to make their own as things solidify) acts as a sort of GM, controlling NPCs and setting up a scenario for others to join into. Your characters then just join the story and go with the flow. It's free-form fun for the whole family.

    Selective stories are special threads, usually dedicated to character backstory or development. These stories are closed to everyone, and only the maker of the story gets to choose who joins and how. They can be free-form, or have a strict format, depending on the thread author.

    Open and Selective stories, for the purposes of world building, are both parts of the Empowered universe. What happens in a Selective thread might effect future posts in an Open thread, and so on. Just like in real life: there are stories that you are a part of and those that are not, but both are valid and might effect each other.

    Does that make a little more sense, or did I only just confuse everyone more?
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    Ughhh.

    So here's the thing. I love your character. She seems versatile, deep, fun, and lord knows we need some good alignments here.

    It's your power that is my biggest problem. Not the sonic scream part, but the manipulation part. Powers like mind reading, mind control, hypnosis, suggestion and that sort of thing, are VERY contentious and potentially toxic in an RP. People don't like losing any sort of control over their characters, and I'm not gonna like losing any sort of control over my characters and NPCs.

    Normally, I would flat out refuse. However, you did put a big leash on it by mostly limiting it to a sort of hypnotic suggestion, and making things that would really cast you into the OP territory. I'm going to wait for Doc and the rest of the RP's opinion on this. If they're okay with it, or if they have a better suggestion we can do that.
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    Aethelia
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  • Oh. Maybe that's more appropriate for DnD type RPs then... Forget that one, maybe I'll come back with something else.


    I'm not actually going to come up with something else, not going to make anyone read another long post for nothing. Sorry for doing it once. I think I read the initial post, but didn't actually understand it well enough.
    From the other characters being immediately accepted, and the damage power being only acceptable one here, I see that powers are meant to be in the form of "how do you hurt/kills things", and I mostly play various types of tricksters and other characters who don't directly hurt/kill things.
    This is not a complaint, I have no problem with being told I won't fit in, happens all the time, and of course the DM should be able to deny characters that don't fit in, I'm not here to mess with the story, I just think I won't be able to come up with an acceptable character that won't mess up the experience for anyone yet would still be interesting to me.
    Also if I try again, it will be immediately clear that all of my characters are based on me but with powers so I can do what I know, seems like that might cause doubt in my RP ability.
    Edit: I think I got quoted again on page 3, apparently this forum notifies you of that happening, but I don't think I want to look... I don't want to cause an argument, sorry for my post, just ignore me.


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    Justinian Ezkantion
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    Ughhh.

    So here's the thing. I love your character. She seems versatile, deep, fun, and lord knows we need some good alignments here.

    It's your power that is my biggest problem. Not the sonic scream part, but the manipulation part. Powers like mind reading, mind control, hypnosis, suggestion and that sort of thing, are VERY contentious and potentially toxic in an RP. People don't like losing any sort of control over their characters, and I'm not gonna like losing any sort of control over my characters and NPCs.

    Normally, I would flat out refuse. However, you did put a big leash on it by mostly limiting it to a sort of hypnotic suggestion, and making things that would really cast you into the OP territory. I'm going to wait for Doc and the rest of the RP's opinion on this. If they're okay with it, or if they have a better suggestion we can do that.
    How come I was able to get away with a similar character back in the last super RP without getting this little chat? You must really like me :P
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