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[OOC] Mandate of Heaven: Lost Paradise
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Leo the First
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  • It's ok Sapp, i get days like these a lot ;)
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  • Thanks for your understanding.
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    Prudii
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  • >.< I was afraid I'd do that...
    >.>
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    Gar taldin ni jaonyc; gar sa buir, ori'wadaas'la. {Nobody cares who your father was, only the father you'll be.}
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    Sapphiron
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  • I know this is abrupt but I have been thinking of concluding Mandate of Heaven (through the escape of Emperor Damian and the ousting of Chancellor Devagus by the Coalition) in my next post, after which I will ask for feedback and decide whether I should have a sequel to continue the story or just end it like that. But I felt that I should ask for your opinions first so Prudii, Leo and Awynn, what are your thoughts about giving an end to this chapter (if there's a sequel) or roleplay (if there's not sequel)?
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    Leo the First
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  • I know life can be tiring, but it sad that you will end such a great RP like this I hope there will be sequel
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  • Thanks, I really appreciate it.
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  • After my last two papers tomorrow, I promise to dedicate time to give this chapter of Mandate of Heaven a proper ending. I will also start drafting on a sequel for Mandate of Heaven and depending on the interest level, it will either be launched or abandoned.
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    Prudii
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  • Sorry for my delinquency of late, and that ending sounds awesome. I was trying to pull something together, and had a few ideas but wasn't able to pull things together into a coherent post. Sorry, Sapp, Leo and Awynn.
    Gar taldin ni jaonyc; gar sa buir, ori'wadaas'la. {Nobody cares who your father was, only the father you'll be.}
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  • Prudii, there's nothing to apologize for.
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    Drexyl Nox
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  • I have to applaud this RP, both as former jarl of culture, and as a vacationing RP guru. This RP had an excellent storyline and great contributors. Bravo, Sapphiron, you have done your region proud.
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  • Thanks for your compliment. This roleplay wouldn't have been a success without Awyyn, Leo and Prudii.
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  • Meanwhile, Awyyn, Leo and Prudii, I would like to ask for your feedback. Are there any areas that you felt I could improve in, did well in etc?
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    Prudii
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  • The only way this could have been better is if more people had decided to join in to expand the story. And you certainly did your best to gather interest from the region both before and after the IC thread was started. An excellent job your part, Sapphiron.
    Gar taldin ni jaonyc; gar sa buir, ori'wadaas'la. {Nobody cares who your father was, only the father you'll be.}
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    Leo the First
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  • I second Prudii, it would have been better if you only had to control Jeremy and no one else.

    I liked the epilogue, can you tell what are the 5 kingdoms you mentioned at the end?
    « Last Edit: October 11, 2014, 02:16:41 AM by Leo the First »
    Leo I Potestas Fortis
    The First Overload and Protector of Leostine, Governor of Leonum, Commander of the Lion Riders and the Patriarch of the Proud House Fortis.
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    Leo the First
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    Sapphiron
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  • State of Lykaios, ruled by House Heinrich
    State of Miranda, ruled by House Miranti
    State of Leonum, ruled by House Fortis
    State of Akatriel, ruled by House Champlin
    State of Sagittarius, ruled by House Sarton
    « Last Edit: October 11, 2014, 05:31:52 AM by Sapphiron »
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