Post #27268
December 20, 2014, 01:58:37 AM
"Oh god, just shut up already, you're giving me a headache!" Felix shouted as the whole bus seemed to go silent. Michael looked at him dissappointingly, though he had the faintest hint of a smile on his face. "What's wrong, you don't like my story?"
Felix raised an eyebrow as he closed his laptop. "Okay, you seem like an alright dude and all, and I can respect your...well for lack of a better word, we'll say creativity. But you can't just walk up to some random person on the bus, sit right next to them, and then suddenly start narrating an entire story. And if for some reason you do, at least make it a good story!" Felix replied as Michael tilted his head slightly like a curious puppy. "You didn't like my story?"
Felix sighed and fixed his glasses as he turned to his traveling companion. "Where do I begin? First off, it didn't make sense. I mean...first he's a cat that's a werewolf, then he's a man that can change into a cat that was bitten by a werewolf, and suddenly it's all a daydream and he's in magic school? That's not even a plot twist, it's an unnecessary change in story elements."
"Well I thought it sounded alright..." Michael mumbled to himself.
"Second of all, it just seems inconsistent. You may as well have said that Alex was a human in magic school, and that his specialty was being able to change form. He happened to like being a cat the most, so after class he'd change into a cat, round up the others, and play in the fields. But one day while he was playing around, one of the cats went into a dark forest nearby...since magical stories always have at least 3. When Alex went to get them, he was face to face with a Werewolf that bit him and turned him. Ashamed, he ran way with his terrible secret in tow, and yadda yadda yadda. That way things mix together and make sense."
"Mine sounded better." Michael responded.
"Ugh...whatever. It's my stop, so catch you later." Felix responded as he stood up and walked out of the parked bus. Michael only watched as Felix crossed the street, narrowing his eyes at the one who scorned his story.
There was only one thought on his mind now: revenge.