Topic: Definition of Public Amendment Act (Discussion)  (Read 129 times)

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Post #116658
January 03, 2018, 02:12:00 AM

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1. This bill shall be cited as the Definition of Public Act.

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2. Section 2 of the Definition of Public Act shall be amended to read:
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2. The term public, when used in reference to Wintreath properties for the purposes of all Wintreath law, shall be defined as, "Any official Wintreath property that is available to any citizen that holds no office, position, ranking, or membership in any organization or body that exists within Wintreath. The term availability shall not be construed to cover things outside of Wintrean control which includes but is not limited to such things as technological availability, ability, internet access, and/or administrative punishments including, but not limited to, banning or muting. Public spaces do include but are not limited to the Wintreath Forums, the Wintreath official Discord, and the Wintreath IRC channel, #wintreath".

I recommend that someone motions to expedite, as this is a simple change I described in the agenda thread.

I also added a missing period at the end. (I did it after the quotes to stay consistent with other laws)
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    Post #116686
    January 03, 2018, 07:08:30 AM

    The quotation mark at the end is a curly quote, while the original was a straight quotation mark.

    Would recommend making both of them straight quotation marks.
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    Post #116695
    January 03, 2018, 08:16:31 AM

    I fixed it. I don’t know how I did that.
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    Post #116696
    January 03, 2018, 08:42:19 AM

    I fixed it. I don’t know how I did that.
    I've noticed that some devices are doing that automatically now. iOS, for instance (though it can be disabled).
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    Post #116799
    January 05, 2018, 02:12:01 AM

    I motion to vote. (And exactly 48 hours after it was introduced :D)

    Edit: 48 hours and 1 second :(
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    Post #116811
    January 05, 2018, 06:01:39 AM

    I second the motion.

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    Post #117045
    January 08, 2018, 01:57:59 PM

    @Aethelia I think you missed this.
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    Post #117047
    January 08, 2018, 01:59:18 PM

    I did... I'm sorry, I was away for holiday break stuff which I planned before I knew there was a chance that I would be nominated Speaker here and there were a lot of new posts when I came back and didn't see this new topic until now.
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    Post #117116
    January 09, 2018, 03:59:46 PM

    I'm here, and see the current vote, but waiting a little based on

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    If we want to make changes, we could change our votes to Nay before @Aethelia closes the vote, then continue revising the bill.

    In the topic in the Citizens Discussion subforum on this.
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