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An Underhusen Medal Of Honor? (Discussion)
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  • Hello, everyone! This is just an idea I've been mulling over for a bit. What if we created a commendation that the UH can give out at their own discretion? Like a Congressional Medal Of Honor or something like that? It wont be much, maybe a Public Proclamation of the good deeds of the recipient, a PM of the Proclamation to the recipient and perhaps Gerrick can create a badge for the new badge system to reflect this. Just a little way that the UH can show appreciation for the fine work of the wonderful people in Wintreath.

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  • I'm always game for new rewards for people, but how would this be different than a Wintreath Commendation?
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  • First, Wintreath Commendations can be issued by the Storting. This would be issued by the UH. Second, Wintreath Commendations (If I recall correctly) do not come with a badge. Third, this is exclusively for citizens of Wintreath, not just Nationstates like Commendations are. Last, Wintreath Commendations are, as far as I can tell, an award given on behalf of the region and the Monarch. This would be given on behalf of the region and the UH.

    Personally, I also feel like Commendations are rarely given, as well they should since they should be given out when you really go above and beyond the call of duty. I feel like this would be a less prestigious award, still prestigious, yes, but think of it as the Bronze Star to the Commendation's Silver Star and to being made a Paragon's Medal of Honor (Ironic, I know).
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  • I see no reason why the Underhusen would need its own medal. After all, the Overhusen generally only acts as a review of Underhusen bills. And if anything, we should modify the Wintreath Commendation to also include people in Wintreath, to reflect our movement away from NS.
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  • So perhaps we should just revise the original Commendation Act?
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  • That's what I'd suggest, yes. Though maybe we should still keep NS in there, in case we want to award it to foreigners.
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  • Add it as a sort of "Throughout both Wintreath and Nationstates" thing? I'm down for doing that.
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    1. This Act shall be cited as the Wintreath Commendation Act.

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    2. Any member of the Storting shall have the authority to propose the Wintreath Commendation be awarded to any person in NationStates that he/she feels deserves recognition for extreme acts of bravery, loyalty, or any other quality the proposer decides warrants the Commendation.

    3. No person who has not received the Commendation shall be authorized to display it in their signature or make any claim to having been awarded the Commendation.

    4. The Monarch of Wintreath shall have the authority to revoke any Commendation previously awarded, so long as the Monarch feels it is necessary to do so.

    5. The Wintreath Commendation shall be as displayed below:


    Enforcement
    6. The Storting of Wintreath respectfully requests the Winter Nomad and his appointed administrators to remove any Commendations falsely displayed in the signature of anyone who has not been awarded the Commendation.

    This is the current version of the law. This would be my little addition.

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    1. This Act shall be cited as the Wintreath Commendation Act.

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    2. Any member of the Storting shall have the authority to propose the Wintreath Commendation be awarded to any person in NationStates and the region of Wintreath that he/she feels deserves recognition for extreme acts of bravery, loyalty, or any other quality the proposer decides warrants the Commendation.

    3. No person who has not received the Commendation shall be authorized to display it in their signature or make any claim to having been awarded the Commendation.

    4. The Monarch of Wintreath shall have the authority to revoke any Commendation previously awarded, so long as the Monarch feels it is necessary to do so.

    5. An announcement shall be made of the Commendation and a public list of all recipients of the award shall be kept by the Underhusen.

    Enforcement
    6. The Storting of Wintreath respectfully requests the Winter Nomad and his appointed administrators to remove any Commendations falsely displayed in the signature of anyone who has not been awarded the Commendation.

    I added "and the region of Wintreath" in 2 to make it official. I also added No.5 to add an announcement and to add a list of recipients. Thoughts?
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  • A few remarks:
    Quote from: Current version
    5. The Wintreath Commendation shall be as displayed below:
    I'm assuming there was supposed to be an image here are something? Though looking through the Underhusen archive, I find nothing.

    Quote from: North's version
    2. Any member of the Storting shall have the authority to propose the Wintreath Commendation be awarded to any person in NationStates and the region of Wintreath that he/she feels deserves recognition for extreme acts of bravery, loyalty, or any other quality the proposer decides warrants the Commendation.
    I suggest removing "region," as that may imply that the person needs to have a nation residing in the NS region.
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    2. Any member of the Storting shall have the authority to propose the Wintreath Commendation be awarded to any person in NationStates or Wintreath that he/she feels deserves recognition for extreme acts of bravery, loyalty, or any other quality the proposer decides warrants the Commendation.

    Quote from: North's version
    5. An announcement shall be made of the Commendation and a public list of all recipients of the award shall be kept by the Underhusen.
    I find the wording here a bit vague, since it's not completely clear who makes the announcement.

    My suggested rewording (which is also more similar in structure to the other clauses of the law):
    Quote from: Suggested change
    5. The Underhusen shall make an announcement of the Commendation and kep a public list of all recipients of the award.
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  • A few remarks:
    Quote from: Current version
    5. The Wintreath Commendation shall be as displayed below:
    I'm assuming there was supposed to be an image here are something? Though looking through the Underhusen archive, I find nothing.

    Quote from: North's version
    2. Any member of the Storting shall have the authority to propose the Wintreath Commendation be awarded to any person in NationStates and the region of Wintreath that he/she feels deserves recognition for extreme acts of bravery, loyalty, or any other quality the proposer decides warrants the Commendation.
    I suggest removing "region," as that may imply that the person needs to have a nation residing in the NS region.
    Quote from: Suggested change
    2. Any member of the Storting shall have the authority to propose the Wintreath Commendation be awarded to any person in NationStates or Wintreath that he/she feels deserves recognition for extreme acts of bravery, loyalty, or any other quality the proposer decides warrants the Commendation.

    Quote from: North's version
    5. An announcement shall be made of the Commendation and a public list of all recipients of the award shall be kept by the Underhusen.
    I find the wording here a bit vague, since it's not completely clear who makes the announcement.

    My suggested rewording (which is also more similar in structure to the other clauses of the law):
    Quote from: Suggested change
    5. The Underhusen shall make an announcement of the Commendation and kep a public list of all recipients of the award.

    I think that was left open for if there was ever a badge made for it.  But as of now, there hasn't been one, hence nothing in my sig. :)
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    1. This Act shall be cited as the Wintreath Commendation Act.

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    2. Any member of the Storting shall have the authority to propose the Wintreath Commendation be awarded to any person in NationStates or Wintreath that he/she feels deserves recognition for extreme acts of bravery, loyalty, or any other quality the proposer decides warrants the Commendation.

    3. No person who has not received the Commendation shall be authorized to display it in their signature or make any claim to having been awarded the Commendation.

    4. The Monarch of Wintreath shall have the authority to revoke any Commendation previously awarded, so long as the Monarch feels it is necessary to do so.

    5. The Underhusen shall make an announcement of the Commendation and kep a public list of all recipients of the award.

    Enforcement
    6. The Storting of Wintreath respectfully requests the Winter Nomad and his appointed administrators to remove any Commendations falsely displayed in the signature of anyone who has not been awarded the Commendation.

    Yeah, the original 5. was a bit confusing for me since it seemed to add nothing so I just replaced it with this version. Something like this?
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  • Looks good to me.
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    1. This Act shall be cited as the Wintreath Commendation Act.

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    2. Any member of the Storting shall have the authority to propose the Wintreath Commendation be awarded to any person in either NationStates or Wintreath that he/she feels deserves recognition for extreme acts of bravery, loyalty, or other qualities the proposer believes warrants the Commendation.

    3. No person who has not received the Commendation shall be authorized to display it in their signature or make any claim to having been awarded the Commendation.

    4. The Monarch of Wintreath shall have the authority to revoke any Commendation previously awarded, so long as the Monarch feels it is necessary to do so.

    5. The Underhusen shall make an announcement of the Commendation and keep a public list of all recipients of the award.

    Enforcement
    6. The Storting of Wintreath respectfully requests the Winter Nomad and his appointed administrators to remove any Commendations falsely displayed in the signature of anyone who has not been awarded the Commendation.

    I made a couple of changes, if that's alright.

    1. "in Nationstates or Wintreath" has been changed to "in either Nationstates or Wintreath"
    2. "or any other quality" has been changed to "or other qualities"
    3. "decides" has been changed to "believes"
    4. "kep" in #5 has been fixed to say "keep"

    That's pretty much it.  Overall it's solidly written.
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  • 1. "in Nationstates or Wintreath" has been changed to "in either Nationstates or Wintreath"
    I prefer without the "either", since it kinda implies an exclusive or, when it could vary well be that accomplishments are in both.

    Also, another suggestion:
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    5. The Underhusen shall make an announcement of each Commendation and keep a public list of all recipients of the award.
    Since otherwise, it might seem that all we need to do is announce that the Wintreath Commendation exists as a thing.

    Now we just need to reformat as an amendment and we should be good to go, methinks.
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    Ambassador to Lovely: 23 February 2016 - 17 August 2016
    Werewolf VII co-host: 11 May 2016 - 5 June 2016
    Skrifa of the 18th Underhusen: 8 October 2016 - 7 December 2016
    Ambassador to Balder: 1 December 2016 - 1 March 2022
    Skrifa of the 19th Underhusen: 7 December 2016 - 9 February 2017
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    taulover
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    1. This Act shall be cited as the Wintreath Commendation Act.

    Legislation
    2. Any member of the Storting shall have the authority to propose the Wintreath Commendation be awarded to any person in both NationStates or Wintreath that he/she feels deserves recognition for extreme acts of bravery, loyalty, or other qualities the proposer believes warrants the Commendation.

    3. No person who has not received the Commendation shall be authorized to display it in their signature or make any claim to having been awarded the Commendation.

    4. The Monarch of Wintreath shall have the authority to revoke any Commendation previously awarded, so long as the Monarch feels it is necessary to do so.

    5. The Underhusen shall make an announcement of each Commendation and keep a public list of all recipients of the award.

    Enforcement
    6. The Storting of Wintreath respectfully requests the Winter Nomad and his appointed administrators to remove any Commendations falsely displayed in the signature of anyone who has not been awarded the Commendation.

    Is this agreeable?
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